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Title: Two School Systems

Outline:

1. 1.      Topic Sentence: Students who study in various countries are totally different.
2. 2.      Supporting Details: Point out that there are three differences between Taiwan and the United Stated, that is, the class sizes between them, what is focused on the whole learning processes, and the time of thinking and solving a problem.
3. 3.      Concluding Sentence: Appropriate education plays an important role in children’s lives, and if we can choose the suitable school system for our children, it will promote their will of active learning.

Different school systems may create various kinds of education

Students who study in various different school systems are totally different. Following is the example between Taiwan and the United States. Theoretically, these two school systems are both in a small class size which means that they can not include too many people in a class at the same time, and it is nothing to do with pursuing your education in Taiwan or the United States. There are two the most different ways which they use to educate their students. The first difference is that the school system in the United States emphasizes on the processes they use to solve the problems, whereas the school system in the Taiwan regards the consequences more than the processes. Second, in the United States, if students ask their teachers some questions, their teachers will conduct them how to think the problems step by step and independently instead of telling the answers to them right away. On the other hand, if the same situation happens in Taiwan, maybe our teachers will give you some time to find the resolutions, but they often think that the speed of thinking and solving problems are important as well. The teachers may give students time to solve the problems, but lacking of time is the main point which causes students can not think independently and creatively. Appropriate education plays an important role in children’s lives, and if we can choose the suitable school system for our children, it will promote their will of active learning.

by Esme 2012.5.2